I have a rough version of my text project ready for the crit tomorrow. I am a bit worried that it is lacking something.... it seems a bit flat.

I still need to add: 

audio -  I think I will use a sound clip of 'under water' because it was like the sound in my head while I was doing the automatic writing task. It was a sort of low, irregular humming, and seems to suit my piece as I felt submersed in my thoughts. As they became more erratic, I felt my heart rate rise a little and I felt excited and inspired. If I was to put this feeling into a sound it might be something with a higher pitch, perhaps the sound of a glass being tapped. After the lecture on sound, I would like to create my own sound clips, but I guess it depends on how much time I have.

I might slow a few of the bubbles down, some which are at the front of the screen, so the viewer has more of a chance to read some of them. Although, the main point I am trying to convey is the feeling of frustration and dis-order I experienced in trying to record all the thoughts that went through my mind while I was automatic writing. I did the task several times and found that each time, my thoughts started off slow and orderly but as I relaxed into the task, I found that my hand wasn't able to keep up with my head as thoughts came and went before I could record or finish recording them. They were overlapping and intertwining.

In my piece, I attempted to re-create this feeling for the viewer, in the overwhelming movement, speed and directional changes in the thought bubbles.  

The idea of my piece is not for the viewer to be able to read the text exactly, but to able to experience the feeling my particular flow of thought and stream of consciousness. 

I wanted to capture the concept of 'automatic writing' - an unpredictable, uncontrollable, continuous, unedited and at times confusing and frustrating process. 

I want to represent the flow of consciousness or 'stream of thought' as water. Movement of thought bubbles in a stream/flow. They will be thought bubbles to represent the thoughts which travelled through my mind during the time I spent 'automatic writing'. 

There were several moments during this time when I felt frustrated because one thought would slide into my mind before the previous one had finished or had been resolved. I want to re-create this feeling in the viewer by creating a scene where only some of the text is readable. This may be because it is moving too fast or there is simply too much to take in. I think this also adds a sense of intrigue and the viewer would feel the sense of frustration I did as the text would disappear before they got a chance to read it or finish reading it. It keeps the viewer on their toes.

This feeling was particularly relevant in the early stages of my automatic writing as my thoughts started out very orderly and organised. 

I want to display the change in my state of mind and consciousness which I experienced during the automatic writing. To begin, my thoughts were controlled and orderly - as if I was trying to organise and categorise my thoughts. As time passed, my thoughts became much more chaotic, random and non-sense as I relaxed and could forget about previously 'dealt with' thoughts. 

I plan to depict this idea of change through changes in the movement of the thought bubbles. Starting off evenly paced and moving in the same direction, gradually becoming more erratic and chaotic in movement, pace and direction. Eventually the buzzing thought bubbles fill the screen. 

a sort of 'screen shot' of what the clip might look like at some stage...

Water - idea for backdrop. Represents the idea of a flow of thoughts.

Just a few ideas for the upcoming Automatic writing project.

I'm thinking of thought bubbles containing the text from my 15 minutes of automatic writing, floating around the screen. Initially, my thoughts were very orderly, I was trying to organise my mind. As I relaxed a little, my thoughts became more abstract and senseless. I would like to reflect this in the presentation. At this stage I'm going to have several thought bubbles moving at the same pace in the same direction. These will contain the 'organised thoughts'. Gradually these will be replaced/combined with ones moving in all different directions at different intervals and paces. These will contain the chaotic and nonsense thoughts, reflected in their movement. 

I will scan in some drawings and handwritten text instead of using computer generated images and text, this would better suit the chaotic thoughts. Perhaps computer generated text would work better for the orderly first part....